Fortunatley most of the points made were on the presentation itself rather than specifically the film but there was a sense of scepticism that my project might be over-ambitious. However the main points were:
- It needs to be made very clear that it's a short film (I have now ammended this by saying so on the title slide)
- Visual elements need to be better explained
- The target audience needs to be developed more specifically
- There should be visual examples of the running fish metaphor connected to the title
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